Constancy of space,
linearity of time
round my tired mind
has been cracking under weight
of dark matters of a tattered heart
that stands shivering bare
in this crowded bar bombinating
with tinder bees, grinder DDs
Bubbling cocktails and thirsty lips
& despite all lustful feelings,
grooving hips, sly winks,
dirty slurs of whisperings,
It’s still you who’s on my wish-list.
©EntangledDesigns
Nice and yes sometimes it’s hard to let go. Nice write!🌼my friend.
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Tell me about it! 🙈 Thank you so much, hon! 💕🌸💕
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I would but you already know ! 💗🌺
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I have an inkling.💕🌸
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Oh! I very much like this! And an extra gold star for clever word play! 😁
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Oh, I love me some gold stars! 😄 Thank you for such a lovely comment. This one kind of wrote itself. 🙂
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I find those ones often come out the best for me. When I don’t have to sit there and mull over words and scan lists of synonyms and antonyms to figure out how to piece it together.
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“scan lists of synonyms and antonyms”… how did you know my secret, so-very-original writing process? 😛
I completely agree with you. Too often the best works come out when you don’t analyze them too much and let the emotions flow freely. By the way, I love your work. Thank you for sharing it.
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